2021届高考英语二轮复习
短文改错+书面表达（三）
题组一：
1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I go to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a change there. For the first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big house to raise some horse. They also had a small pond(池塘), in that they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned return every two years, but he agreed.
2.你校正在组织作文比赛,请以你身边值得感恩的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括: 1. 介绍人物; 2. 说明理由。 注意:
1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文题目已为你写好。
The One I’m Grateful to
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1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Most of us feel nervously when we take an important exam. There is no doubt whether exams are important, but it's more important to have a right attitude. As matter of fact, exams are only a mean of evaluating. Therefore, there was no need to worry too much about the results. Only by making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffer from the pressure. We'd better to go out for a walk and doing some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make them possible for us to perform well. A cup of hot milk before going to bed might help us have a sound sleeping.
2.一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。内容包括: 1. 传统的庆祝方式;
2. 现今人们在这个节日中的一些活动。 注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
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答案以及解析
题组一： 1.答案：
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The One I’m Grateful to
My dad is the person whom I’m most grateful to. Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spiritually.
Every morning, he gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for me. No matter how busy he is, he will drive me to and from school, rain or shine. When I am down or feel anxious about my grades, my father will take me to a park, or invite me to see a movie to help me relaxed. If
necessary, he will accompany me to a psychologist for professional assistance. What’s more, he has a positive attitude to life, which has an everlasting effect on me.
It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily. My gratitude to him is beyond description. 题组二： 1.答案： Most of us feel doubt
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on Lunar August 15th of a year. When that day comes, a big family dinner is a common scene in most traditional families, after which family members will have a light-hearted talk while drinking tea in the open air. Sitting around some light snacks
and bathed in the moonlight, people usually chat with each other and tend to ignore how much time has passed. Among the snacks, the mooncakes symbolizing good fortune and reunion, are a must which are made with diverse materials in all tastes.
With the quickening pace of life and improving means of communication and transport, such a family reunion doesn’t seem compulsory any more. People have other forms of relaxations, such as travel. Nevertheless, however far away you are, greetings from the loved ones won’t be absent that day.