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假如你是某中学的高一学生李明，最近与母亲关系紧张，难以相处。请根据下表内容用英语给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith写一封80词左右的求助信，请他帮你解决问题。
你的情况 1.学习成绩好； 2.爱母亲； 3.有点害怕母亲。 你母亲的情况 你的问题 1.大学教授，工作勤奋，很少1.与母亲很少交有时间和你说话； 流； 2.对你严格要求，易发脾气。 2.不知如何沟通。 [习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文 Dear Mr.Smith， I am writing to tell you my problem ①1.避免词汇搭配错误 ④处in改为with troubled me for a long time.It is ②relationship 2.杜绝语法错误 between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor ③she works very hard.She is strict ④in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies，but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper ⑤easy.I don't know how to communicate with her. ①处troubled应改成troubling ②处应添加冠词the ③处应添加连词and ⑤处easy改为easily ⑥处exchange改为exchanged 3.要点一定不要遗漏 补上⑦处要点：I'd appreciate it if you give me a way out. 眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档
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Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and ⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts.⑦ (如果您能帮助我，我将不胜感激。) Best wishes. Yours sincerely， Li Ming [自我提升]——向极优作文迈进 Dear Mr.Smith， I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubling me for a long time.It is the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor，②and she works very hard.She is strict with me but ③she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies，but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily.④I don't know how to communicate with her.⑤Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.I'd appreciate it if you give me a way out. Best wishes. Yours sincerely， Li Ming
高级句型 ①处改为定语从句：which/that has troubled me for a long time ②处改为现在分词短语：working very hard ③处改为倒装句：so busy is she with her work that she finds little time to talk to me 用the reason why...is that...连接④、⑤句：The reason why I don't know how to communicate with her is that we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts. 眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档眼皮蹦跳跳专业文档