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紧扣高考英语作文评分标准

●高考作文采用总体评分方式，集中在以下四个方面： 1，覆盖了题目提出的所有内容要点和要求；

2，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，内容比较丰富； 3，在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误；

4，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅。

●高考英语作文完美行文四步骤

STEP1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、

开头结尾等。

STEP2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细

节、合理发挥等。

STEP3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。 STEP4：避免粗心犯下的错误，扬长避短。

高考英语写作技巧汇总 （一）掌握技巧： （1）注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分（opening paragraph）：说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Body paragraphs）：围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）：对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。 （2）确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

（二）巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 表示罗列增加

First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,

at first, in the beginning, to begin with,

later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

表示解释说明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, in fact, actually

表示转折关系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand,

in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,

表示并列关系

or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or,

neither …nor

表示因果关系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a

result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless 表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever,

whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)

表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较

be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like,

just as,

表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, 表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously,

above all,

表示概括归纳

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion,

as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion

附高考评分标准

1. 本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

2. 评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于100和多于140的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 评分时应注意：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。

5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 第五档（很好）：（25-30分） 第四档（好）（19-24分） 第三档（适当）：（13-18） 第二档（较差）：（7—12分） 第一档（差）：（1-6分）

词汇知识运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节：多项选择（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 1. There existed an obvious ________ between the accounts of the witnesses, so a judgment was not announced in court. A. association B. authority C. conflict D. restriction

2. Our milk powder is especially suitable for children under 6, as it helps a lot to build the body's natural ________. A. reservation B. defence C. variety D. heritage

3. A best friend is one who can always read your minds when you are at a loss for the ________ words to complete your thoughts. A. temporary B. absolute C. precise D. reliable

4. After six months training, the whole team is ________ in form, and is expected to be able to get through to the final. A. superb B. automatic C. cautious D. enthusiastic

5. The family were enjoying their dinner, so I was wondering if I had arrived at a/an ________ time.

A. awkward B. prosperous C. flexible D. particular

6. The U.S. government on Wednesday ________ former Commerce Secretary Gary Locke as ambassador to China, making him the first Chinese-American ever to take the post. A. accumulated B. reflected C. distinguished D. confirmed

7. Miss Green often said “God helps those who help themselves”, intending to ________ on us the significance of being independent. A. base B. impress C. focus D. rely

8. With the situation worsening, the army threatens to ________ if a general election is not to be held as scheduled, BBC reports. A. take up B. take over C. take on D. take apart

9. The national team’s unexpected 6-2 win on Friday ________ a drunken celebration that lasted well into weekend. A. held up B. put forward C. set off D. tore down

10. Although police could be seen everywhere, they seemed to be searching the houses almost ________. A. at ease B. at random C. at risk D. at length

第二节：完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

What I noticed first about my new parrot, Chico, was that he couldn’t fly. His wings had been

cut short and he was stuck on the 31 just like us humans. When the weather turned nice, I took Chico outside. I sat him on a branch of a tree, hoping to make him 32 . At first he seemed 33 . He walked back and forth on the branch looking anxious or nervous. He didn’t even flap his wings in an attempt to fly. Somehow he knew he was 34 .

One day Chico got especially excited . He paced back and forth and made an incredible amount of 35 . Then all of a sudden he stopped and let out an even louder scream. He started 36 flapping his wings for the first time ever － then he lifted off the 37 like a space shuttle! I was amazed and 38 . Little did I know his feathers had been growing back, and Chico had been 39 until the moment was ripe for escape!

Two days later Chico 40 . First I tried to trick him back with food, but he would not come near me. Then I took his 41 and put it away—still he would not come. Finally, I made him a firm promise that I would let him 42 every day the weather was nice if he did come back. 43 , he flew onto my shoulder. From that day on, whenever the weather was good I would let him out early and he would fly around and be back before dark. The 44 lasted for two months before suddenly Chico became 45 . The vet said that he had been infected with a disease from the pigeons in the neighborhood. Within a few days he died.

I was very sad. The 46 crossed my mind that if I had not set him free to fly, he would be still alive. But what 47 is there in being a bird if you can’t fly?

Chico made his first break for 48 on a late Monday afternoon in April. When will you make yours? You too can take a 49 when the conditions are right, knowing you too, in your own way, were built to fly. If you don’t 50 , what will be the purpose of your life?

11. A. floor B. earth C. scene D. road 12. A. smarter B. healthier C. happier D. stronger 13. A. disappointed B. determined C. frightened D. confused 14. A. incapable B. disabled C. wrong D. stupid 15. A. noise B. progress C. energy D. consideration 16. A. slowly B. gently C. madly D. gracefully 17. A. ground B. tree C. cage D. branch 18. A. moved B. shocked C. delighted D. excited 19. A. struggling B. pacing C. flying D. waiting 20. A. left B. returned C. survived D. recovered 21. A. cage B. feather C. chain D. food 22. A. in B. out C. off D. alone 23. A. As usually B. At that moment C. Once in a while D. At the same time 24. A. action B. attempt C. routine D. effort 25. A. active B. injured C. sad D. ill 26. A. fact B. concern C. thought D. detail 27. A. sense B. mistake C. interest D. problem 28. A. life B. freedom C. fun D. food 29. A. break B. holiday C. chance D. look 20. A. keep yourself busy B. cheer yourself up C. let yourself down D. set yourself free

阅读理解（每小题分2分）

阅读下列短文，从每篇短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

A

For the past two years, 8-year-old Harli Jordean from Stoke Newington, London, has been selling marbles(弹珠). His successful marble company, Marble King, sells all things marble-related － from affordable tubs of the glass playthings to significantly expensive items like Duke of York solitaire tables － sourced, purchased and processed by the mini-CEO himself.

“I like having my own company. I like being the boss,” Harli told the Mirror.

With profits now in the thousands, “the world’s youngest CEO” has had to get his mother and older brothers to help him meet the growing demand.

Harli launched Marble King after swapping marbles at school led to schoolchildren consuming his marble collection. Yes, he literally “lost his marbles.” Harli and his mother, Tina, turned to the Internet to find replacements.

Harli saw an empty space online: the marbles he wanted were hard to find. Within months, Harli had his own marble-selling website － and orders started pouring in.

Tina says her son's attachment to marbles started when he was just 6.

“His attachment became so passionate that we started calling him the Marble King — so when he wanted to set up a website it was the natural name for it,” she told The Sun.

“I never thought it would become so popular － we are struggling to cope with the number of orders at times.”

The 8-year-old boy has his sights set on expanding his business and launching his own brand of marbles.

“Sometimes his ideas are so grand we have to scale them back a bit. But his dream is still to own Britain's biggest marble shop and open stores around the world,” Tina told The Daily Mail.

“At the moment he is annoying me by creating his own Marble King marbles － so that could well be the next step for him.”

31.Harli’s Marble Company became popular as soon as he launched it because ______.

A. it was run by “the world’s youngest CEO” B. it filled the gap of online marble trade

C. Harli was fascinated with marble collection D. Harli met the growing demand of the customers 32. How many mass media are mentioned in the passage?

A. One B. Two C. Three D. Four 33. The underlined expression “scale them back” is closest in meaning to ______.

A. hold them down B. carry them out C. set them aside D. clear them away 34. What message do the last two paragraphs carry?

A. Conflicts often occur between Harli Jordean and his family.

B. Harli’s mother and brothers are worried about Marble King’s future. C. Marble King marbles will surely attract more fans around the world. D. The “Marble King” has great ambition for his Marble King company.

B

Do American children still learn handwriting in school? In the age of the keyboard, some people seem to think handwriting lessons are on the way out. 90% of teachers say they are required to teach handwriting. But studies have yet to answer the question of how well they are

teaching it. One study published this year found that about three out of every four teachers say they are not prepared to teach handwriting. Some teachers are teaching handwriting by providing instruction for ten to fifteen minutes a day, and then other teachers who basically teach it for sixty to seventy minutes a day － which really is pretty much for handwriting.

Many adults remember learning that way － by copying letters over and over again. Today’s thinking is that short periods of practice are better. Many experts also think handwriting should not be taught by itself. Instead, they say it should be used as a way to get students to express ideas. After all, that is why we write.

Handwriting involves two skills. One is legibility, which means forming the letters so they can be read. The other is fluency － writing without having to think about it. Fluency continues to develop up until high school.

But not everyone masters these skills. Teachers commonly report that about one fourth of their kids have poor handwriting. Some people might think handwriting is not important any more because of computers and voice recognition programs.

But Steve Graham at Vanderbilt says word processing is rarely done in elementary school, especially in the early years. American children traditionally first learn to print, and then to write in cursive, which connects the letters. But guess what we learned from a spokeswoman for the College Board, which administers the SAT college admission test. More than 75% of students choose to print their essay on the test rather than write in cursive. 35. We can infer from the first paragraph that ______.

A. teachers spend little time in teaching handwriting.

B. most teachers attach importance to teaching handwriting. C. handwriting teaching is not commonly required. D. most teachers are at a loss how to teach handwriting

36. Which of the following about traditional handwriting in the USA is NOT true?

A. The students are taught by practicing a long period. B. Printing is taught in preference to writing in cursive. C. Handwriting is taught for its own sake. D. Two skills get involved in handwriting.

37. Some American people consider handwriting not important any more because ______.

A. all the American children learn to print first

B. about 1/4 of the students choose to print their essay on the test C. it is unnecessary to use handwriting in the age of keyboard D. computers and voice recognition programs are widely used 38. ______ may serve as the best title for the passage.

A. Handwriting: fascinating in keyboard age B. Right or wrong: the death of handwriting C. Two skills involved in handwriting D. Handwriting lessons on the way out